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During a New York City business trip, an offbeat detective miserably undercover as an IT employee stumbles upon a murder at her office, forcing her discreet use of real skills that, coupled with her quick-witted, tech-savvy nephew's unsolicited help, cause things to spiral out of control, risking her fragile bond with her only remaining family, her sister.
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This sounds interesting, Priya Balaji, but I suggest tightening up your logline. It’s really long (57 words). And I really like the title!